Well done, a detailed and thoughtful post. Well done for placing screenshots of your video alongside other videos. You also integrate theory. Great! A few things need work... 1. I'm not sure that I agree it's a non-linear narrative - it's pretty clear at the end of the video that Jamie's relationship is over. 2. I think it's worth acknowledging that the mise-en-scene for your band shots isn't ideal - it looks a bit middle class. Finally, modify your comments on representation. Because the audience is positioned with Jamie, we feel dislike for Gaby especially as she starts a relationship with someone else!... not the best representation of women!
Well done, a detailed and thoughtful post. Well done for placing screenshots of your video alongside other videos. You also integrate theory. Great! A few things need work... 1. I'm not sure that I agree it's a non-linear narrative - it's pretty clear at the end of the video that Jamie's relationship is over. 2. I think it's worth acknowledging that the mise-en-scene for your band shots isn't ideal - it looks a bit middle class. Finally, modify your comments on representation. Because the audience is positioned with Jamie, we feel dislike for Gaby especially as she starts a relationship with someone else!... not the best representation of women!
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